新东方4 6级考试作文免费辅导课程 讲义 第三课
Should Firecrackers Be Banned?
1. 有人认为放鞭炮是好事,为什么?
2. 有人认为放鞭炮是坏事,为什么?
3. 我的看法
2. 造成:cause、lead to、result in sth.、bring about、be
responsible for
First,setting off firecrackers leads to fires.Secondly it result in injuress to people.Finally it also brings about noise.
On the other hand, there are many people who say that firecrackers should be banned.
They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders. They also say that firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.
注:point out 指出;be responsible for 造成
On the other hand,there are many people who say that pets should be banned.They point
out that pets are responsible for nioses which disturb people's rest,and for injuries suffered both by the people who keep them by innocent neighbors.
My own point of view is that we should preserve the old custom of letting off
firecrackers, while at the same time making them harmless. We can do this by banning firecrackers from public places. In addition, we should restrict the setting off of firecrackers to festival days.
注:My own point of view is that we should be allowed to keep pets, while at the same time making them harmless.
1998年6月
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?
1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。
2.我认为数字和运气无关……
注:Some people believe that some number can bring them good luck.
For example in China the number eight is believed to be a number that can bring people good luck.Another example is the number six.
第二节
1998年6月
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?
1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。
2.我认为数字和运气无关……
注:Some people believe that some number can bring them good luck.
For example in China the number eight is believed to be a number that can bring people good luck.Another example is the number six.
There are people who believe that some numbers bring good luck, while others bring bad
luck. For instance, in China the number eight is thought to be lucky. Turning our attention to the West, we find that the number seven is considered lucky, but the number 13 is avoided like the plague.
注:认为:is thought、is considered
In spite of all these claims, most people would agree that there is little evidence that numbers
have any influence on our lives. In fact, they say, the reverse seems to be the case. ……In fact, they say, the reverse seems to be the case. For one thing, we might expect calculators to break down every time they note the number 13, and for another, although every week has seven days we know that not every week is lucky for us.
Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of
view. It is obvious that there is no scientific basis for the belief that there is a connection between luck and numbers. All in all, it seems to me to be superstition.
注:latter -> former;superstition 迷信;All in all, it seems to me to be a waste of time.
第三节
As a general rule, people like to help others, but there are occasions when you should say no
to requests for favors. For instance, it is better to refuse when a child pesters you for sweet food and drinks or for too many toys. Another example is when a relative asks you to use your influence to get him or her a bank loan or a work promotion.
注:pesters sb. for 缠着某人要……
However, we cannot ignore the fact that many people are reluctant to say no. They feel that if
they turn down a request from a relative or friend, they will cause ill-feeling within the family or become unpopular with their acquaintances. A notable case in point is when the boss asks them to do something which they feel is unreasonable.
注:2004年1月 “Reduce waste on campus”
we cannot ignore the fact that many students are wasting food.
……Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and saled them again after several
days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a
high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.
1998年1月
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.假冒伪劣商品的危害 2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品
注:把问题说清楚分成三步:
1、提出问题 2、分析问题 3、解决问题
Like most people, I welcomed the advent of the market economy. Nevertheless, it must be
admitted that, along with the benefits of the market economy, have come problems. In my opinion, the biggest problem is the large number of fake and shoddy goods, which are found all over the country and do great harm to society
第四节
1998年1月
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.假冒伪劣商品的危害 2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品
注:把问题说清楚分成三步:
1、提出问题 2、分析问题 3、解决问题
Like most people, I welcomed the advent of the market economy. Nevertheless, it must be
admitted that, along with the benefits of the market economy, have come problems. In my opinion, the biggest problem is the large number of fake and shoddy goods, which are found all over the country and do great harm to society
注:The existence fake commodities a complex problem, with which this society is confronted.
杰出:outstanding;急迫:urgent; nevertheless 然而 = however
It must be admitted that, along with the benefits of the internet, have come problems.
Fake and shoddy goods are harmful on two levels. Some people think that the quickest
way to make profits is by selling poor-quality commodities, and this undermines the nation's economy; at the same time, some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people's health. This makes consumers distrust the sellers, and the free market in general.
注:Fake commodities do harm to consumers' health.
I drank a bottle of water so I had a bad stomachache, so I went to see the doctor.
level:层面 (on);aspects:方面 (in)
In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be
worked out to ban the manufacture and circulation of fake and shoddy goods. At the same time, consumers should be educated to identify sub-standard commodities. With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time before fake and shoddy goods become things of the past.
注:打击犯罪:crack down on;规定:regulation;制定:work out ;鉴别:identify
警觉的:alert;before -> for;become -> to become;“population explotion”
Population explotion is a complex problem with which…
分析问题、分析原因
失去控制:out of control
解决办法
In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be
worked out to control the birth rate.
At the same time, the people should be educated to one child policy/family planing.
At the same time, the people should be educated to carry out one child policy.